Rewrite the following first-draft sentences. You may need to change wording as well as structure.
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Circe was dumped by Odysseus, which really sucked for her.
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Dr. Horrible did not design the Freeze Ray to be susceptible to water damage. Trying to freezerayify his sidekick Moist proved that it was not invulnerable.
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Q-Division requires you to please fill out forms X-524, X-525, and X-527, which together make up the ACUT - the Application for Cross-Universe Travel. Bring the filled-out Application forms to the armory to receive your special equipment.
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The honour of the neighbourhood at the centre of District 12 was defended by Katniss Everdeen, who volunteered for the role to protect her sister, who she felt was too young for the fight.
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The Beholder, which allows itself to be studied by a selected scientist, does so because it wants to study him back and, later, attack him.
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The robot that violated the first law of robotics, which was owned by the Weston family, was certified as safe by Susan Calvin.
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The Sandman uses sand to send people to sleep. If someone is slumbering, the Sandman can enter into her dreams.
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The captaincy of the Enterprise was not accepted by Spock.
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Swearing and getting into street fights makes hair grow all over your body if you’re a werewolf.
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Tiuri was invited by Ristridin to hang out at his crib in the spring.
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